第一篇：如何寫好英文自薦信

如何寫好英文自薦信

寫作任務(wù):

新學(xué)期,你們學(xué)校新創(chuàng)辦的一份英文校刊需要一批學(xué)生小記者。假如你叫王英，想成為?？囊幻∮浾?。請根據(jù)下面的問題合理展開想象，給?？鞴苋薽r. zhang寫一封自薦信。

詞數(shù):60左右。

1. what class are you in?

2. what are your hobbies?

3. what are you good at?

寫作分析:

這篇習(xí)作是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封自薦信。因此看到這樣的寫作任務(wù)時(shí)，要從三點(diǎn)出發(fā):

一、信件格式接下來幾期我們還要遇到一系列關(guān)于書信的不同形式的寫作任務(wù)，所以這一期我們先復(fù)習(xí)一下書信的格式:

◆信頭：指發(fā)信人的地址和寫信日期，寫在信紙的右上角。地址的寫法與漢語不同，要先寫小地點(diǎn)，后寫大地點(diǎn)。在地址的下面寫日期，日期的順序是:月、日、年或日、月、年。如:august 19th, xx / 19th august xx。

◆稱呼:指對收信人的稱呼，寫在信頭之下，從信紙的左邊開始。要注意英文的稱呼后面是"逗號"，而不是"冒號"。

◆信的正文：從稱呼的下一行由左邊第三個(gè)或第五個(gè)字母開始寫。◆結(jié)束語：指正文下面的結(jié)尾客套話。

◆署名：一般從信紙的中央靠右寫起，第一個(gè)字母大寫，末尾用逗號。寫信人的姓名前一般可以加上yours sincerely等字眼，如果對方是親密的朋友，可用yours，love等。

二、寫自薦信要注意的幾個(gè)方面:

1. 簡單介紹自己的基本情況；

2. 說明寫信的目的；

3. 表達(dá)愿望。

三、內(nèi)容分析

這次的寫作目標(biāo)單一，介紹自己，表達(dá)出你想成為a reporter for the school magazine這一愿望。具體內(nèi)容是由3個(gè)問題涉及到的內(nèi)容組成，故可以這樣安排寫作層次:第一部分，介紹你的基本情況如姓名、年齡、班級等；第二部分，為文章的中心段，重點(diǎn)介紹"你的愛好"以及"你最擅長的"，介紹的這些應(yīng)與"記者"日常工作密切相關(guān)，這樣才有說服力，然后再說明你成為校刊小記者后的打算；第三部分，說明自己想成為校刊小記者的迫切愿望，希望盡快得到回復(fù)等。

初稿:

dear mr. zhang,

my name is wang ying. i’m fifteen years old. i’m in class 3, grade 8. i want to become a reporter for the school magazine.

i like singing, reading, watching tv, playing sports and making friends. if i can become a reporter for our school magazine, i will work very hard. i’m sure i can become a good reporter. i think that being a reporter is very interesting. i hope you can give me a chance. thank you.

wang ying

初稿點(diǎn)評:

這篇習(xí)作從整體上看，格式正確，小作者介紹了自己的基本情況，包括姓名、班級、年齡等，然后講了自己的愛好，并表達(dá)了自己想當(dāng)一名?？浾叩脑竿Ｎ墓P比較流暢，敘述較為清楚，基本達(dá)到了本文的寫作要求。不足之處主要有三點(diǎn):第一，作者講述的"愛好"中，還缺乏與"記者"這一工作最相關(guān)的一項(xiàng)能力，即"筆頭功夫"，因此,writing這一項(xiàng)是必不可少的。第二，內(nèi)容不完整，即沒有涉及到最擅長的內(nèi)容。第三，個(gè)別地方銜接不是很嚴(yán)密，如"i think that being a reporter is very interesting."一句與其前句一起看，意義就不大了，可刪除。

成稿:

dear mr. zhang,

i’m wang ying from class 3, grade 8. i hear that our school magazine needs some reporters. i would like to become one of your reporters.

i have a lot of hobbies, like reading, watching tv, making

friends and writing. of all these hobbies, i like reading and writing the best. if i can become a reporter for our school magazine, i will work very hard at it. i’m sure i can become a good reporter.thank you. hope to get your reply soon.

wang ying

成稿分析:

成稿結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言精煉，語法準(zhǔn)確，尤其是介紹自己想成為一名記者的條件以及成為記者后的決心，表述完整、邏輯清晰。

powerful sentences:

1. of all these hobbies, i like reading and writing the best.所有這些愛好中，我最喜歡讀書和寫作。該句也可說成:i like reading and

writing the best out of all my hobbies. of表示"??中"，它構(gòu)成的表范圍的介詞短語常用于形容詞或副詞的最高級中。如:jim is the tallest of the three. 吉姆是這三個(gè)人中個(gè)子最高的。

2. i am interested in painting, so i’d like to join our

school’s art club.我對繪畫很感興趣，因此我想加入我們學(xué)校美術(shù)俱樂部。be interested in意思是"對??感興趣"。如:

i’m very interested in that movie. 我對那部電影很感興趣。would like to do想要或喜歡做什么

……此處隱藏3926個(gè)字……一門最崇高最神圣的藝術(shù)。她需要忘我的奉獻(xiàn)和不斷進(jìn)取的精神以及全面發(fā)展的個(gè)性。因此，在這五年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，我從未停止過努力，生活過的忙碌、充實(shí)而有意義。從這一份簡單的自薦書中，您也許會從那一點(diǎn)滴的成績里感受到這種努力和上進(jìn)的精神。在面臨著社會的選擇，尤其榮幸的面臨著閣下您的選擇的時(shí)候，我可以無愧的說：“我可以值得信賴!”

在我進(jìn)行人生第一次事業(yè)選擇的時(shí)候，我毫不猶豫地選擇了貴***，因?yàn)槲蚁嘈刨F***在閣下您的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)下具有廣闊的發(fā)展前景和美好的未來。同時(shí)我也期盼著得到貴***的肯定及閣下的認(rèn)同。我一定會為之而努力!

盼望著早日得到您的佳音!

衷心祝愿您身體健康、事業(yè)順利!

此致

敬禮

真誠的求職者：****

****年**月**日

優(yōu)秀自薦信范文二：

尊敬的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)：您好﹗

您能在百忙之中展閱這份自薦書，是我無限的榮幸，更是我長久的期盼。我懷著希望和自信，接受您的挑選。

呈現(xiàn)在您眼前的不僅僅是材料，更是我用心血和汗水、熱情和奮斗書寫的一段光輝歷史。五年大學(xué)，花樣年華在我失敗與成功、痛苦與快樂、徘徊與執(zhí)著、迷茫與思索、漫長而短暫的求學(xué)生涯中，我孜孜以求，不惜奮斗?！耙环莞?，一份收獲”，我的付出終有了些回報(bào)：連獲六學(xué)期甲等，兩學(xué)期乙等獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金，期期成績排名全班第一的我，得到同學(xué)和老師的贊賞，連(請你收藏好 范 文，請便下次訪問wWw.)續(xù)五年擔(dān)任年級學(xué)生會生活部部長，鍛煉了我的工作及組織管理能力，培養(yǎng)了我的高度的責(zé)任心。注重綜合素質(zhì)的我頻頻在演講比賽、辯論賽、歌詠比賽及科研活動中獲獎(jiǎng)，獲大學(xué)生綜合素質(zhì)三星級證書。身為“校園之聲”廣播臺記者，科技協(xié)會及演講與口才協(xié)會會員的我，更在各種社會實(shí)踐及社會活動不斷完善自我，超越自我，創(chuàng)造自我??相信識才善用，閱歷豐富的伯樂您，定已發(fā)現(xiàn)我這匹千里馬非常之處。

理論與實(shí)踐相結(jié)合是我的特色，高度的責(zé)任心和進(jìn)取心是我的本色，我自信能成為一名優(yōu)秀的醫(yī)生。

品學(xué)兼優(yōu)的我敬候您的回音。

此致

敬禮

***敬上

****年**月**日

財(cái)務(wù)專業(yè)英文求職信范文

dear in charge of recruitment:

i jilin university school of economics and management management information systems, a professional undergraduate students. before graduation, i hope to be able to find a suitable for your own work. according to my existing knowledge and capacity, i am prepared to candidates of your company mis knowledge or the need for knowledge of computer programming jobs.

compulsory subjects in the study courses, i have always been interested in computer programming (c + + builder), foreign language learning and e-learning and application. in the computer, i passed the computer two national and

provincial secondary examination. in addition, i am in the application of c + + builder software development of a large number of practical, in-depth practical experience in programming, and has been不輟-depth study and improve their level of programming. in a foreign language, i started high school attaches great importance to the practical application of the capacity of training. in the university, i have co-organized the association of foreign language in english speaking engagements and seminars to invite foreign teachers activities. in addition, i take a second outside the japanese, the japanese have a certain level. in the network, i too repair gate network technology, network information resources, e-commerce courses. at the same time, i specializing in the internet than to collect and send information. i have done for six tutor students (remedial english and computer operation). and in a second-year secondary school students had a 20-day substitute teacher of english. in different people and to cooperate and the process of progress i get more inspiration and more like the completion of the work challenging.

if i could have the honor to realize their aspirations to enter the effectiveness of your company, i will make every effort to achieve the goals of your company, with their co-operation in the job can best be done. thank you very much care.